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Peer Editing Worksheet

PEER EDITING WORKSHEET

Your name:_____________________________________________________

The writer's name:________________________________________________

 What is the paper's thesis? Is it easily recognizable?

 Is the writer documenting her/his work?

Is the writer documenting his/her techniques?

Is the writer describing her/his theme?

 Do you find that the paper contains enough evidence to support the claims it makes?

Read the paper outline with the author…how smooth is the transitions between sentences? Cite one not-so-smooth transition from one sentence to another within the same paragraph so the author can make an improvement.

Read the paper outline with the author…how smooth is the transitions between sentences? Cite one not-so-smooth transition from one paragraph to another within the same paragraph so the author can make an improvement.

 Check grammar and punctuation.

Are the paragraphs in the correct order?

 What do you like about this paper? What does the writer do well? (say why)

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